Review Detail of darking6564 in Inside Inazuma 11

Meh my first story. I don't know much about writing. There are a lot of mistakes in my writing. I don't really check my work. I write as I go there is really no idea in my mind. The design of the character is based on me. My updates used to be daily but now I'm feeling a bit lazy. I'm a bit disappointed in myself. Maybe from now on 2000 words per chapter. That's a promise. Hopefully. I don't really know. I need more stones.