Review Detail of Konrad_iguess in One piece : Metallica

Author’s shameless review I have finished writing the first volume so I think I can review it now. I still think that my writing is quite mediocre and the plot progression needs to be improved. I tried to avoid grammatical mistakes whenever possible but some might have slipped out of my surveillance. I think the beginning portion is a bit messy and I might rewrite it in a better form in the future. Overall I think this isn’t the best fanfiction in this platform as this is my first work but if you are bored enough give it a shot maybe you’ll like it. If you have any questions just ask and I’ll answer them if I’m not busy. If you have any constructive criticism leave them in the comments. Thanks for reading and here’s Tesoro with his iconic walk.