Review Detail of SalveYing in Trials of the Multiverse

I read more than half of the chapters and here is my review. It's good; I like the premise and that the character is not a fool. I like the first world they explore; it has good grammar and feels fluid. Now, the bad, according to me: I don't like that the system has so much dialogue. During a fight, half of it was dialogue from the system saying that its abilities were improving, and I found it somewhat annoying. Even so, I recommend it.