I'll try to provide a review based on what I've read up to the current level (Ch.27). Overall, I find the book to be a good read, although not perfect. There are some noticeable grammar issues in certain places, but it's still understandable and doesn't disrupt the flow. One aspect I particularly enjoy is the relationship between the main lead (ML) and the female lead (FL). I appreciate the author's commitment not to introduce a harem, as it keeps the focus on their dynamic. While the story itself may not be groundbreaking, I've noticed some instances of foreshadowing that hint at potential developments. The characters seem well thought out, but the author's lack of experience sometimes hinders conveying this effectively. Nevertheless, I appreciate the character development, especially how past traumas continue to affect the MC. The worldbuilding isn't overly complex, but it's clear and well-structured, allowing for a vivid understanding of the author's vision. In conclusion, I find the book to be authentic, as the author isn't afraid to try new things and experiment a little. It's a pleasant read, makes me smile, and I hope the author continues with it rather than dropping it. Please continue writing and improving! The book is good, and depending on how it progresses, it has the potential to become even better! Stay committed, and thank you![img=update]
InfinityPlus
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me gustaThe story is told from a man's point of view, but his wife is an important part of the story. I don't know if I've understood your question correctly, so please ask if there is anything unclear.
That_Annoying_guy:Is this single fl author?
InfinityPlus: Thank you very much😊 And yes I try to get better!
InfinityPlus:The story is told from a man's point of view, but his wife is an important part of the story. I don't know if I've understood your question correctly, so please ask if there is anything unclear.