Review Detail of Will_Petty_0928 in DxD: Lucifers bastard

Item: DxD: Lucifers bastard
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Will_Petty_0928Lv135mthWill_Petty_0928

it felt like a robot wrote it where is your soul man there was no drive no passion just a lot of sophisticated talk and endless drawl in your explanations i hope you write better in the future good luck

DxD: Lucifers bastard

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I’ll keep this in mind for future reference,I appreciate the review and honesty.

5mth

Will_Petty_0928Lv13Will_Petty_0928

no problem if you ever consider doing a rewrite or want someone to help bounce ideas I'm always available lol

TIERNAN07:I’ll keep this in mind for future reference,I appreciate the review and honesty.

5mth