Review Detail of CarolineInPajama in Overgearing Heroines

Honestly, I'm just confused at what's even happening these past 30 chapters, what's with Sun only making a move after years of waiting, even though she fairly killed it easily, I'm just as confused at the character development and their interaction with each other but it's getting better as I read but goddamn the world background, is this even a VR game world? or Is this one of the games he played and died and got reincarnated into it? The grammar's pretty good though but I'm just confused about the development of the story, it's just making me not enjoy this novel at all, I don't even know what does the mc even looks like... but but but I'll say the Author has the potential to be a great writer because of your good imaginationn, try reading some great novels for a bit and see how they progressed their story and the character development too at least... It's not a fun experience reading this but it's not bad either, it's just an Ok Novel, hope your writing skills improve as you write cause u got the talent for it!Note that because of this problem, I didn't fully read each chapter so some of my complaints may be fairly inaccurate!