the grammar is spotless and your writing style is easy to read. 👍 but what I like most is Jack's character development. we see the go from the weak dude he was, to where he is now, and I hope to see him grow much more powerful. 🤞🤞 looking forward to seeing more!!
Alexcj
Liked it!
me gustaSin respuestas. ¡Sé el primero!