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ebeilijanLv38mthebeilijan

I love the story but you don't make the plot very clear. the synopsis needs to be edited and characters more clearly described .

Ming Liao

Stinkypinky29

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Thank you for your advice. I have actually rewritten it according to what i had envisioned previously, do read it again and feel free to comment about any mistakes.