Nice start! It's an interesting story, the character design, story flow, and word-building are to the point. I like it! There aren't any grammatical errors in the story, and thanks to that, I can read with ease. No spoilers are needed since it's better if you try this story. Give it a try, it's worth your time!
Takaie
Liked it!
me gustaSin respuestas. ¡Sé el primero!