Review Detail of ShadowOrigin in Did I just awaken an overpowered ability?

Giving it 5 stars to encourage you. The story is interesting but the world background......... Let's just say you have a lot to improve. Some suggestions -> you can use AI tools to enhance the writing like Chat GPT. Input your story. Tell it to make it better then edit the improved version to make it fit according to your taste. And there you have it. An Improved version of your story