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HeavensPath
HeavensPathLv117mthHeavensPath

It's a nice story with good potential if written properly, good thing you left Gu xun'er, I always don't understand authors (except a few) trying to get Gu xun'er and it always looks forced. I can also see that you left Ya Fei and did not get in touch with the auction hall.

BTTH: The choices we make

Fantasy_Cr_22

Liked it!

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Fantasy_Cr_22
Fantasy_Cr_22AutorFantasy_Cr_22

yeah, I was thinking maybe Yun Yun and Cai Lin only

HeavensPath
HeavensPathLv11HeavensPath

yea, you can make changes on the way whether you want to add more or shorten the number of woman.Anyway looking forward to your updates, good day.

Sylinax
SylinaxLv5Sylinax

Both of them are a bit oversteemed, try to do something more unique ( it seems to be forced if he get involved with them and Cai Lin will probably kill him on the spot)

Fantasy_Cr_22:yeah, I was thinking maybe Yun Yun and Cai Lin only
Ronin46
Ronin46Lv4Ronin46

Maybe add xiao yi xian or zi yan to those 2 you already decided 👍.

Fantasy_Cr_22:yeah, I was thinking maybe Yun Yun and Cai Lin only
Pawan_Singh_5724
Pawan_Singh_5724Lv1Pawan_Singh_5724

Bhai aage ki novel kha h

Fantasy_Cr_22:yeah, I was thinking maybe Yun Yun and Cai Lin only