Really good story in my opinion . The grammar is pretty good for English not being your first language( I think you said that). The only thing I don’t like is that he pretty much gets the same rewards each time he cultivates maybe change it up a little instead of getting a new robe each time. I also dislike that the mc allows too many people to depend on him .
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me gustaSin respuestas. ¡Sé el primero!