The writing is shit, grammar is bad so it hurts my head to read it. On top of all of this the story synopsis doesn’t give it a good introduction for the readers. TBH, if I had read a synopsis for this story the way it is I wouldn’t have bothered to read it. Sorry but you as a writer need help to improve and you also need a proofreader to help. I’m just kinda ranting so I’m not worried about grammar and such while writing this review
William777
Liked it!
me gustaSin respuestas. ¡Sé el primero!