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Review Detail of Zetsway in Empire of Winter

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Zetsway
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It's bad. Writing quality is actually the decent thing in this, and that is also very bad. We get no background for the MC, not even a single line to tide things over. The Rob is just there to info dump on powers. This section would have been much better if it happened after the reincarnation and put as needed when he uses one of the abilities gained(no need for a ROB scene). I also dislike mind control, so that's a huge minus for me. Also, there is 0 world background and development, I guess the author expect us to know all things about ASOIAF/GOT.

Empire of Winter

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NexIuz
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This is like my 200th Asoiaf fanfic and I can confidently say this is in the top 20 already, like the 18th but still in top 20, alil more background in chapter 1 would be nice (character background and alittle world background)