your story sounds to me really interesting! I see so much potential here. Your writing style is different from mine but I realize this perfectly suits your narrative and your story. It will definitely manage to pique the readers' curiousity. Just one thing. please make longer chapters at least with word counts of 1000 per chapter. There's only this one thing to remind you. And so far, I don't see nothing to criticize 😆
Hendrik_Verwoerd
Liked it!
me gustaSin respuestas. ¡Sé el primero!