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I’m sorry but to me the story was a major let down I thought this was going to be good but I find myself lose interest and even annoyed at like chapter 5 when he was talking to vegeta it’s like if your are gonna write something write something that makes sense how would he even know frieza he wasn’t on namek and you made vegeta not question how does he know about any of that. And how was it in the internet they were on a different planet and again that doesn’t raise any alerts on dbz characters. Now it would made more sense if he told them he was not from this world and told them everything he knew about them but you didn’t add that in.

Saitama In Dragonball

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Hope this doesn't get removed