The world that the author built is really interesting. And the plotline is very unique as well. There are only a few chapters available so I don't know how the story would turn but it really shows a very promising story development. But if there's something to call out for, I think the length of the paragraph needs to be broken down. For some like me who were reading using a phone, long and continuous paragraphs don't suit very well. Overall, it's a good read. Keep working on the book, author.
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