Review Detail of Durjoy_Jack in MHA: Monarch [Re-written]

Ok, first of all, BNHA is the worst world to choose for this type of story, and second of all, what the heck is wrong with chapter 11?! I mean, you did copy the first Dungeon from the main story, and it's ok 👍. But really, the whole weapon threw thingy you had to do that and ruin the whole story. And I never saw any BNHA hero using actual weapons (except that dude with a gun) and a spear. Just try to create something from yourself. Don't copy Solo leveling step-by-step. Ok, now why did I say the world BNHA is a bad choice for this type of story is because this is a hero and villain story where heroes can't kill, and it's frowned upon by society itself. And I am not saying Midoriya is a bad choice infect he is close enough to mirror E-rank Sung-jin-woo. But still, it would have if it was in another verse like( tensura, kumo desu nani ka, overlord, HSDXD,ATG) because this world's can give MC a lot of space to grow. Anyway, work hard. I hope next of your work will be a wonderful peace of work.