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Chelsea_Lolipop
Chelsea_LolipopLv21yr
2023-09-04 21:52

there are too many mistakes in the writing first: misuse of his abilities there is no explanation about his strange powers in terms of the world mha... second: he kills or captures slime criminals I'm surprised she can still walk calmly without being caught by the heroes (mha motto heroes don't kill) and also Alright is in place, he just silently ignores it too out of character with other heroes... Maybe you should try reading the Fanfic "Throne of Time" It's the same as your story Kurumi in mha with clear logic...

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Hmmm…. I guess that makes sense. Thank you for your criticism. Appreciate it.

Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4

Throne of time is Yuri?

FellowAnonymous
FellowAnonymousLv3

I would read it but the author said they can’t stand yuri and there will be a love interest at some point in the next three worlds and therefore I won’t because I don’t enjoy reading a female lead with male paring but thanks for the suggestion.

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