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Great Story, the characters are extremely fleshed out, and their actions make sense. I hope there is more world-building on how exactly the viltrumites fit in the DC universe and their exact power scaling soon. And there is no need to force a Harem if you feel like you can't write it properly.

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Tbh that is pretty good advice I’m defo gonna make the harem smaller. Maybe 4 or so and leave some as short term romances, also the Viltrumites will be fleshed out in the 4th Arc after the Raven Arc.