Review Detail of Tarhuala in ECHOES OF FATE

The storyline is solid, but the brevity of each chapter leaves something to be desired. Anticipating a new installment every day only to find it so brief can be somewhat disappointing. Additionally, some of the chapter beginnings lack a compelling hook. While the grammar is generally acceptable, there is room for improvement. I recommend thorough proofreading of each chapter to maintain immersion, as encountering grammatical errors or enduring a slow trickle of very short chapters can disrupt the reading experience.