decent overall, iIthink that you should add what happened between Uzumaki and him joining the culling games.if i remember correctly chapter 17 takes place on Oct. 31 and chapter 18 takes place on Nov. 12
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That’s true, I’ll make sure to mention what happened between that time. Thank you for the review 🫡
did he like talk with tengen or is it gonna be a flashback
Rwn4:That’s true, I’ll make sure to mention what happened between that time. Thank you for the review 🫡
Nah, he went straight to the culling games. He only wants smoke
vixinity:did he like talk with tengen or is it gonna be a flashback