Review Detail of Demons_and_I in Alabaster's memoir

Reading this feels like trying to watch a movie with your eyes closed, relying on only what the actors are saying to create a mental picture.....Grammar isn't too bad, but the words used make reading become a chore. Not only that, but the events being described are more in a telling fashion. We want to see the characters play out their roles, not the author telling us how the characters play their roles out. While this might not make sense at first glance, you'll understand it soon enough...