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Review Detail of SpookierSapling in Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer

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SpookierSapling
SpookierSaplingLv149mthSpookierSapling

The world choices are great and really interesting, but tbh I think the author’s story building, character design, and writing quality is bad. The characters don’t act realistically and there’s no real story to the ff, it’s just go to a world, beat up the bad guys or fix the problem, pick up love interests or cuck main characters of that world and just take theirs, then go to the next world. The conversations are hard to read, and author is just adding random memes or quotes from movies that don’t make sense and just makes you question, “why would you do that?”

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SpookierSapling
SpookierSaplingLv14SpookierSapling

I'm coming back to say that while I think the story is not very good, I also want to say that I do have respect to the author and the authors who make stories on this app as story making is pretty hard. So while I don't like it, I hope you keep building and improving as you write, thanks for the chapters