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Review Detail of Giga_Weeb in Desire of Immortality (Harry Potter AU)

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It goes for a good AU setting, but then immediately falls apart with plot holes (if his parents dont like arcturus why leave him with him etc.). Could've been good but the author cannot go a full half chapter without randomly dropping a line that shatters the HP worldbuilding and rules. like magic abilities that dont use magic, wands having infinite magic, 2 stones, insane permanent power ups that canonically AU or not should've needed a massive dark ritual from 'putting magic through your arm.'

Desire of Immortality (Harry Potter AU)

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grimmhorizon
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thank you for this. this is why I read reviews.

Skull_of_Life
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In fact, the story is still good, certainly better than reading about vomiting heroes.

grimmhorizon:thank you for this. this is why I read reviews.