Review Detail of Cloudee77 in Reincarnation of the Totem

Hi، everyone whoever happens to pass by this story! I am the author here۔ Though it feels wierd reviewing your own work but I just wanted to set a kind of reminder for myself. Reading it for myself trying to view it partially is ofcourse very difficult, but let's just put it all away at once. yeah.The element that the beginning of my story carries is mystery. it's filled with co relations. How much I have done justice to that I Don't have any inkling. Another thing I am pursuing is sketching out emotions as much as possible. Not tears but simply letting emotions flow. Which many of my characters do freely, even though there are many constraints on them. I have planned a lot for this tale. I wish my future self have kept the pace going.finally please give this story a try and feel for yourself. this review was kind of for those who might pass by without seeing any reviews or rating. though it is still, authors, my own, but it just kind of feels like okay to do? On the other note, I like to hear any kind of constructive criticism, however harsh they maybe, very much. please feel free to give me ideas, or what I missed out.thankyou for being hereand welcome