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Review Detail of NightroPulse in Reincarnated As A Not So Useless Sakura

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NightroPulse
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To be frank, this story seems like an empty husk. Everything is rushed and summarized, so it's written like a diary for the most part. Pretty common among amateur writers, I know, but this one takes it to a new level because aside from the pre-reincarnation phase, there hasn't been a single line of dialog through the 6 chapters. I planned on reviewing after the 6 chapters, but really lost interest after 4 despite the really short chapters (which feels like inflation BTW, for number of chapters and updates), so just skimmed the last 2 for dialog. A shame, because there were a few instances for some amusing interactions. So overall, it just seems like a rough draft for how an author would want a story to be directed rather than an actual story.

Reincarnated As A Not So Useless Sakura

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Thank you for the honest opinion, I am still improving as a author as this is my first ever book in general.

1000IronBladeHero
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Don’t give up Author I was just like you once writing my fics like a diary until I started noticing how other fanfic writers wrote and just sort of adjusted myself to write my fanfics a bit like their’s

2_Spoons:Thank you for the honest opinion, I am still improving as a author as this is my first ever book in general.
Doldman116
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2_Spoons:Thank you for the honest opinion, I am still improving as a author as this is my first ever book in general.