The story seems pretty cool from what I've seen so far, but details and inner monologue seem to get repeated over and over again to the point where I find myself skipping a lot. The first chapter almost turned me off the story for how many times it described how cool and strong the MC was, to the point it almost felt masturbatory for how many times it was repeated. Other than that great story and looking forward to more.
Hanma_Jack
Liked it!
me gustaSin respuestas. ¡Sé el primero!