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Honestly I've been disappointed with what I've read so far.Writing quality is so poor and story progression is just all over the place, you can't just skip parts of a story if it has impact on the storyline.You told us something about the orphanage that brought a qualitative change to the mc but you didn't specify it, just kept it vague.It's too late for this book but take note on your next book.

Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest

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