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5 star rewiew becasue i think this has potenial. my only complaint is the long justu discriptions and the half chapter note explaning what happend to the uchila. most of us reading naruto fanfic has read the manga/seen the anime. those of use that already know that stuff going to not read it and the discriptions of the justus so chapters seem thin even tho they arent. keep writing it will only get better no need to edit btw i have dyslexia btw sorry for misspellings if there are any

Naruto: Hyuga Simulation

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