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TsukasaFrier
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I like the development of your main character in your story. The story pacing is good but the paragraph for beginning chapters are too long and a bit little difficult to read but it's not really a big deal. Overall, your story and plot development is amazing. Keep up your good work!

Ashes of Humanity: The Solitary Survivor

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Thank you for the feedback! I'll keep that in mind, It's actually a good catch, I've been reading some of my chapters as well to quickly update if there's some error and I notice the same thing.