Here let me write your first review. You are a good translator, creating well written and easily read stories with low amount of errors. This story has the potential to be a good one, but we would need to know how many chapters were written for this story. BTW IMHO you can't publish good stories by only translating the original text, because most Chinese novels are badly written/edited pieces of work that need more than just translation to be readable.
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me gusta5834:I usually try to replace words that is more descriptive and helps improve the quality of sentence.