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Well the Story is quite good but the Grammar isn’t good and some sentences don’t make sense (still much better than MTL) But the biggest Problem is with the logic, there are constant things that simply make no sense. Like Mc saying he wants to surpass the otsutsuki and then comparing that to Kurenais Illusions somehow

devouring uchiha shisui at the beginning

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The author is very inconsistent...