Review Detail of pressuresore in Restart: The World Savior's New Beginning

Writing Quality, readable. There're a lot of minor mistakes but it's better than some books that you have to literally guess what's being said. Story Development, Great. I really like the development so far. Some scenes are awkward but it's great overall. There were also some parts that are irrational but hey, it's fantasy. Character Design, I really liked how her feelings were portrayed after killing the Final boss. What's making it hard for me to like her is that she's contradicting herself a lot. She wanted to be surprised but then she asked the goddesses about the dungeon. There were more but I can't remember as of the moment. Updating Stability, I only started reading a few hours ago so I don't really know, I'll just rate it 5. World Background, Great. It was explained well before she really embarked on her journey. I hope you can improve the writing quality. I suggest you get an editor, only if you have the resources.