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So far it is pretty good. One thing I'd comment about is the fact that the guy is supposed to be pretty old and experienced, but his temper is too short sometimes, otherwise 10/10

Martial Peak (Fic)

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True, I should work on his emotions, but I can't make him look meek. If he is the Sage who has been through many battles with his emotions intact and after his emotions were severed, Then he experienced countless lives, each with a different story; it's kind of hard to make an absolute personality. I think being ruthless is better than trying to be a saint, since it is a cultivation where you have to rule with an iron fist.