Review Detail of Spelloyal in Reborn in Game of thrones with LOHP as Arya Stark (DROPPED)

The idea is good, it has potential but the fic seems to be the continuation of another and the grammar is terrible in a way that demonstrates a lack of interest rather than skill. I can forgive someone with bad grammar or non-native speakers using MTL to write but I can't forgive choppy and incomplete sentences, it just goes to show that the author didn't even bother to read what he wrote before posting. If the author committed himself a little more to the fic it would have made a great story, but the way it is I don't recommend it.