You really should put in your synopsis that if the reader didn't read your other work they will find this fic very hard to understand. Well, this or use the fact that there are only 7 chapters and edit them to put more context. There is A LOT of cultivation stuff with a lot of details that don't mean anything with prior knowledge. I would recommend more details in the first chapter when the mc mention that this the third life, and a minor explanation of the cultivation concepts when introducing them. Hope these tips helps.
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