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Extreme northern wuxia cultivation and uplifting fix-it story. It's alright, the writing quality would benefit from a spellchecker, the story does develop rapidly although for a large part along lines that arent even remotely impossible to develop at those speeds even in our world. The character him/her self is a bit bland, I feel no emotional connection with it, nor is it Arya in anything but name. The chapters are of fantastic size, so that's major kudos right there. World background is mostly what is default to the series her agricultural upliftment programs that somehow outperform most countries irl combined lol
Reborn in Game of thrones with LOHP as Arya Stark (DROPPED)
Schooldean
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Don't worry about it. I rarely rate more than three stars, and I only rate on the technicalities wn asks us to rate on. So you're doing great. You still got three stars on that rating criteria which in my eyes is avarage for wn fanfics. You scored pretty good on the other criteria, and if you check the review it's structured in the same order, so you know why I rated each thing the way I did. Most stuff got 4 stars. If I were to rate on my personal opinion of the story and not on the technicalities, you'd be a solid 4/5 stars already. Just do your best where you can, and enjoy writing the things you write. That always shimmers through with positive effect on every part of the story, character included.
Schooldean:Thank you. I am happy for the review The emotional connection part is probably not going to improve, I can say I'll do my best but my best will disappoint...That is why I try to explain that the MC has problems with emotions.