The story is actually quite light and easy to understand, but you move too quickly from one scene to another, even within a single chapter, which feels too brief. If you were to make the story longer, it could undoubtedly become an engaging slice-of-life genre. When you swiftly change conflicts and events, it prevents readers from fully immersing themselves in the novel. However, the writing quality is already very neat and impressive.
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