Review Detail of RyotoKH in One For Her [Midoriya Izuku X OC]

Just one word, cumbersome, that's all I feel reading this. It's not bad, but it's not good either. Is there potential? A lot, yes, but like it did so many things wrong, the paragraphs being excruciatingly long makes it hard to read without losing interest I really dont know how that works and not to mention it just feels dredfully emotionless, like all I feel like im readinf are words not a story, just whatever one wants to say and comes to the top of their head. I won't go on how what went wrong or where the wasted potential is since it's everywhere. This novel is just straight up what it is not much thrill, really, you read a story for plot, for something interesting, something unpredictable or unique but this is just straight up bland soup, its alright