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Review Detail of PatrickS in One Piece : Kaizoku-Ō

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-Zoro got blasted by Kuma's Power -All of sudden he got transferred to Narutoverse.-Doesnt have knowledge about Narutoverse, but know about 3 doujutsu.-out of nowhere Zoro have Rinnesharingan on his left eyes and will trade it with Orochimaru if Oro revives Kuina.-i don't know where he get it, but it seems Zoro have Kuina's cells with him.-Zoro suddenly knows about Haki even thou he just get rekt by Pacifista.all of this happen on 6 chapters, and there's no explanation about it at all.*sorry for bad English, at least you know what I mean.

One Piece : Kaizoku-Ō

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I’m afraid and sorry that you have misunderstood it all. This, is not a ‘plot hole’, but something that will be explained afterwards in the novel itself.

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lol if all of what he said happened in short amount of time(chapters) without explanation , even if you say it is to be explained at a later chapter or to be used to build up the plot it is indeed overwhelming since in most cases it fall under the category of forced plots. my advice is to take it slow about zoro knowing somethings that a zoro of one piece is not supposed to know. after all no matter what you say like it will be explained later on or it would be explored on a later chapter we readers don't know that and all we know is that zoro should not know things from naruto when he does not not have the knowledge of naruto prior to that. you are trying to Kumo desu ga, nani ka? but not many likes that kind of 💩 as most readers of fanfics uses their mind focused more on imagination rather than critical thinking such as thinking ahead of time.

Yami_No_Kami_:I’m afraid and sorry that you have misunderstood it all. This, is not a ‘plot hole’, but something that will be explained afterwards in the novel itself.