Review Detail of Bloob in Anon's Identity is Classified | Izuku M. & Katsuki B.

Pretty well made, you should work on grammar and scene transitions, maybe add dates to when scenes happen so the reader doesn’t have to calculate in their head how long anon was talking to bakugo when kirishima says 11 years. Could be longer I guess, the mafia scene seemed a bit off character development wise, and there didn’t seem to be a point in anon getting doxxed other than spending three years away, but like, I assumed someone had a quirk to do it but my first thought was that anon didn’t seem that well hidden.