Review Detail of Ruemari_Cordan in Living With Death

First of all, the story seems catching even from the starts that you will wonder what kind of fate Daniel and the death/grim reaper will encounter as the story goes on. Second, I really like the way you narrate/describe the scenes, thoughts and action of the characters it's understandable. Lastly, your grammar and chosen words it's good. I expect a lot of interesting things to happen in this story.