Review Detail of HandsomeWriter in Arc Of Time: Pillars Of Light

I like that each character has their own way of looking at things and that comes across in their viewpoint. However, the story often feels chaotic and disorganized, with viewpoints often shifting during the same chapter. The POV switches are loudly announced, but they each feel distinct. The buildup is very slow, taking around ten chapters to hit the inflection point. The first person perspective is refreshing but may not appeal to many readers. I think that splitting the chapters to more align with POV switches will greatly improve the reading quality, as will sharpening the fist few chapters.