1. First of all there isn't a proper cover. You haven't even wrote synopsis which means it doesn't gave any idea about your book.2. There are no inverted coma around the dialogues. No proper paragraph. Not even any explanation of the dialogue who is saying and what he/she was doing when saying those dialogues.3. The starting wasn't understandable. And also the chapter words count should be at 1000 to 1500 words.4. There is not even a proper background.
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me gustaI didn't wanted to be harsh😊 I was just telling you your mistakes. I just wanted to help you. I hope you will improve your book and hope you get a contract from webnovel too
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I know🤗🤗thank you so much dear.♥️I just realized my mistakes, again, thank you.I also hope I get one too♥️♥️
_Carolina_writes_:I didn't wanted to be harsh😊 I was just telling you your mistakes. I just wanted to help you. I hope you will improve your book and hope you get a contract from webnovel too