Review Detail of Nightrice in Tragedy of The Eternal Champion

The story has a very tragic setting and I liked the flow of the story. However, there is some weird capitalisation going on, but that did not disturb much of my reading. Sometimes, the pacing is a bit weird, but it was still good enough for me to understand what is going on. All in all, not bad and I'd like to see what you will do with Eternus! Keep up to good work!