I honestly couldn’t even get past chapter 1 because there is zero punctuation and horrible spelling. Sometimes even the wrong word is used.
Tahmina_Begum_9138
Le gusta a personas 2
me gustaI mean, I can try it again, but I can’t guarantee that I will continue after that getting past the grammar was hard enough, but the small glimpse of personality that I saw from some characters was not appealing at all.
Tahmina_Begum_9138:I hope your still reading I gess hearing this story and I hope you like it I make sure to fix the previous ch
at first I shrugged it off mc was 5 would make sense for improper speech but on CHP 3 when a 30~ year old professional assassin cant say mystic? and says Mistake yeah.. spelling is bad Grammar is Bad Idea is decent? maybe? Flow is non existent it's an attempt at least now will you try to improve or will you give up (like I did I realized writing wasn't my calling)
in all honesty I have improved a lot, from will what ever this was, no really what was I trying to write
King_Of_SpaceTime:at first I shrugged it off mc was 5 would make sense for improper speech but on CHP 3 when a 30~ year old professional assassin cant say mystic? and says Mistake yeah.. spelling is bad Grammar is Bad Idea is decent? maybe? Flow is non existent it's an attempt at least now will you try to improve or will you give up (like I did I realized writing wasn't my calling)