Review Detail of King_Joshua_Curato in The War Orphan - Pokefanfic

The story is great. The drama is there. Tragedy is there. It keeps you wanting to read and at the same time you dont. Not because its badly written, its just that it feels like the protagonist is barely hanging on and seem irredeemable with boiling wrath but no means. No money, no knowledge, it feels like torture. To top it off, theres a suspected transmigrator. Would you look at that? Why not the MC right? And the ralts even has problems or possibly talents unearthed but at present could only be a liability. Authors seems like to make this as a tragedy focused fic, and the few reads were good but heavy to read.