Translation is good, but unfortunately the story just isn’t, basically any douluo fic that follows tang san and yu xiaogang ends up being trash because the mc acts brain dead to agree with all the stupid decisions that those two make and the mc in this one is braindead choosing to stay with yu xiaogang rather than have full access to all of spirit hall’s resources, get a bunch of aid from spirit hall plus other bonus’ just for 10% opinion boost with yu xiaogang and a cultivation technique which means nothing compared to the amount of resources he could have gotten.

Translation quality is quite good but unfortunately the story lacks character. It's just the doulou story copied with a new mc. I typically don't like tang san/master follower type fanfics due to them just being copy pastes of the original story and compared to other great doulou fanfics this one can't even hold a candle to them. All in all just a very disappointing story that had alot of potential.

in fact, you can quit already on chapter 1 when he immediately, when he was given a choice, said "why should I be afraid of death" here all his stupidity is shown completely. Instead of thinking, he immediately starts thinking about weakness. It must have never occurred to this stupid jerk that the system is asking him if you like this world or if you want to go to another one. and does not ask the question "are you weak if you choose the first one", as if provoking him. He also immediately shows everyone his second fighting soul . I wonder what his expression will be, and his next divine choice will be 500 years from now?. instead of thinking about revealing or not, or asking the system when and under what circumstances he is given a divine choice. he immediately shows his trump card. and besides, he will follow the "master"

To be honest this is just a protagonist that follows Tang San like a lost puppy and makes brain dead choices. There is just no life in this story it is just sad

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