Review Detail of StoryCraft in Larry King vs The World: How I explored the stars with My Babysitter

Hey guys the one and only forcespeed4 is here, I just wanted to drop a quick note to say thanks for all the support you've shown for my story so far. If you're liking what you're reading, please feel free to leave a comment or review, add it to your collection, or even give it some love with stars or Firestones - shameless 5-star ratings are totally welcome ;) I can't promise that I'll be able to take on every suggestion or critique, but I'll certainly do my best to incorporate as much feedback as I can to make this story the best it can be. Depending on how busy life gets, I'll aim to post a new chapter every day. But, if the story is really taking off and I'm feeling the love (and maybe a few power stones!), then I might even try to sneak in an extra chapter from time to time. Oh, and one last thing - I wanted to let you know that Saki Yoshida from Metamorphosis (aka the "177013" girl) makes an appearance in this chapter. After reading about her tragic end, I wanted to rewrite her story and give her a different fate. But she's not the last character my protagonist will save, so I'm curious to hear your thoughts on who else he should rescue next!